Sir Kaius

RIP to a great writer who showed me even super heroes have flaws.
Kaius

another great chapter in this saga. can't with to see how it develops. I wonder if dragons will return with the magic. As terrifying as it would be i hope they will, but will the best for good or evil.
Kaius

This chapter took me by suprise. I must have missed a update. What a pleasant surprise it was too. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I am so happy Kyle has posted another chapter to this story. It looks like there is some trouble brewing in Chip's team. I wonder how long he can keep Candice going AWOL a secret. 
Kaius

While I have not read all the stories on this site, I do have a eye for content and some grammar issues. Not that I am a grammar Nazi or anything. I do enjoy the revolution universe as well as the Kandric and Destiny universes. I wI'll as learn other stories as needed to look for content issues. I am willing to help.
Kaius 

spoiler alert for those who only read Kandric saga on this site. 
Kyle,
I have a problem in chapter 30. After the Alphar submit to Aster they are absent from the story line. I can not. believe they would have abandoned him, especially during the city escape and at the ambush. I get the sense the would be willing to lay down their lives for their  prince unless ordered to do other wise. 
Not to mention Connor's guardians where are they in the battle at the Inn. Plus why were they not assigned Garm counterparts because it is clear they are in combat outside the Alphar lands.
I hope this doesn't upset you or complicate things for you. I just observed this little over site 
Kaius 

I would have to go with Glenn, Scott and Alexander as my favorites with Alexander comes out on top because his temper tantrums remind me of my own troubled youth. Scott would be next cause the kid is brave and scary at the same time. Glenn is just cool. As for the officer Rail clan. I like them but those hoods seem like angels compared to the street thugs I deal with on a regular basis on the streets of Baltimore. Let me tell you the 12 O'clock boys would have Officer Rails kids running for the hills. Those boys are just ruthless. Now I do like to hate agent Paulson as the villain. I often judge a writer on how well they can make readers hate yet admire their villains and Kyle does this with brilliance. As for the others I am beginning to like the AoG kid and the one kid who linked up with the paintball team. I am sorry I don't remember there names right now. There are too many characters and I am horrible with remembering names.
Kaius

Kyle,
I love this story. Keep up the good work. I do have a bit of an FYI for you, coming from a old paramedic. In the days before inhalers we would treat asthma with strong coffee. The caffeine and xanthine in coffee helps to open airways. Epinephrine   will also work and can be made from animals by any decent chemist. Cow and pig pancreas can be minced to produce insulin for sherif Will, but the process is very involved and it needs to be refrigerated
Thank you for writing
Kauis.
 
 

Nice work. I really like the wolf!
Kaius