Emperor Roland Posted May 31, 2018 Report Share Posted May 31, 2018 So... Gary has decided to share another wonderful story with us. please let him know what you think about... Gary Conder The Pride of Lachlan McBride Chapter 1 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 1, 2018 Report Share Posted June 1, 2018 This story is starting out completely different that "At The Turning". This first chapter if in a completely different wright g style than the other was well. It seems to dwell in fine details and descriptions. It is interesting and I saw return to see where this takes us. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 1, 2018 Report Share Posted June 1, 2018 Give this one a chance, Jay. We are now set in modern times, which in itself is a departure from the first novel. There is a lot of detail in this story, that many might find tedious, and many might actually relate to. This is actually a coming out and romance story. Wayne has a lot of hangups and really has never dealt with some deeply held secrets about himself. I can't say more, without revealing more of the story. Al Jay and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 1, 2018 Report Share Posted June 1, 2018 As always your insight is welcome. The fact it was in a totally different style from the first was shocking to the system. I shall return and read more as the first one was so enjoyable. We need to try the new. We may find it just as enjoyable as the other. Thank you for perking my interest even more in the story. I will wait on the edge to see what may develop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 7, 2018 Report Share Posted June 7, 2018 Gary Conder "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 8, 2018 Report Share Posted June 8, 2018 This chapter was a totally joy to read. You pushy It's just did not win out this day. Ralph wonder once he is cleaned up what will Wayne think of him. Wonder who or what that was he saw at the gates. The filling inside the house adds that much more interest to the story. That is why I like the first one so much unexpected things would pop up. I look forward to seeing what is in store for Wayne next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 14, 2018 Report Share Posted June 14, 2018 (edited) Gary Conder "The Pride of Lachlan McBride"Chapter 4Chapter 3 Edited June 16, 2018 by Al Norris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c21cesky1 Posted June 16, 2018 Report Share Posted June 16, 2018 Cannot find/open Chp 4??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 16, 2018 Report Share Posted June 16, 2018 Because of 2 mistakes! The first mistake was in the newsletter - Wrong chapter! Then I compounded that mistake by posting what was in the newsletter without actually checking my own file that has the actual schedule in it. My apologies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 17, 2018 Report Share Posted June 17, 2018 This chapter was a total joy to read. It would seem Wayne is having second thoughts. Jack is overpowering and demanding. As Wayne is finding out. We will see what happens next time. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 21, 2018 Report Share Posted June 21, 2018 Gary Conder "The Pride of Lachlan McBride"Chapter 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted June 22, 2018 Report Share Posted June 22, 2018 Well, well it looks as Wayne may have started to wake up. I think once he is back on the farm he may open his eyes wider on all fronts. We will just have to see want we. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted June 28, 2018 Report Share Posted June 28, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 5by Gary Conder JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted June 29, 2018 Report Share Posted June 29, 2018 Hello Gary, Wayne and Ralph are opening up to each other a bit more now . Look forward to the next chapter too, . Thank you for sharing this story with us , . Johnny C. Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted July 5, 2018 Report Share Posted July 5, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 6by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted July 12, 2018 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 7by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted July 19, 2018 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2018 Gary Conder The Pride of Lachlan McBride Chapter 8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted July 26, 2018 Report Share Posted July 26, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 9by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 31, 2018 Report Share Posted July 31, 2018 Now the story is getting very interesting. The encounter at the cottage with Stephan Henderson was still on his mind. I will have to return and see where this leads. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted August 2, 2018 Report Share Posted August 2, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 10by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted August 3, 2018 Report Share Posted August 3, 2018 I am now enjoying the story even more. Wayne now has Lachlan diry in had. He may learn the answers to the questions he has been asking himself. We will have to call come back to see what has been left for him to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted August 9, 2018 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2018 Gary Conder The Pride of Lachlan McBride Chapter 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted August 10, 2018 Report Share Posted August 10, 2018 I am really enjoying this story. Wayne now on the farm. Ralph having proved it since Wayne's last visit. I truly enjoyed the part of the two young me on the road. It will be interesting to find out more. I must return it is getting better each new chapter. JohnnyC and Al Norris 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted August 16, 2018 Report Share Posted August 16, 2018 "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 12by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted August 17, 2018 Report Share Posted August 17, 2018 5 hours ago, Al Norris said: "The Pride of Lachlan McBride" Chapter 12by Gary Conder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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