Castle Herald Posted September 12, 2016 Report Share Posted September 12, 2016 (edited) [Special Note: The new website is now live. As a result the links throughout this thread are invalid except for the latest posting to the thread. All of Arthur's stories can now be found at Arthur] Arthur The Twilight Galaxy Motel Chapter 1 Edited October 3, 2017 by Zach Caldwell Link website notification Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted September 13, 2016 Report Share Posted September 13, 2016 Did you ever think you missed somthong. Well of you do not read the begining of this story you will. It is just a wonderful read that is enjoyable. I look forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auramazda Posted September 13, 2016 Report Share Posted September 13, 2016 Nice story I liked a lot, almost good like the drummer boy (that is fantastic), you go a long way better from the house of vlad, I readed it on nifty, There is only a little thing that can or maybe must get better, the sci-fi explanation on the how the alien go to Earth, how they know that Earth would explode and the travel sistem (naturally under light speed), I'm a greet SF fan and for a so good story I want a good parascientfic explanation, for now is at the level of the book of John W. Campbell Jr (sci-fi writer between 1930-1950) were the science replaces magic, I hope to get something a little more near the modern SF. PS: the little Sheldon Cooper on my right shoulder say that you must do it absolutely better or he will start stalker you, instead the little Sheldon Cooper on my left shoulder (I know I'm very nerd) say you must redo the editing of the chapter there are a dozen error, almost 3 too instead of to and other Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted September 13, 2016 Report Share Posted September 13, 2016 Thanks auramazda for the comments about what you would like to see more of in terms of the science and for pointing out possible editing errors. I am sure the author appreciates the feedback. Thank you for reading and you can look forward to more to come. Thanks for posting! JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted September 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 Arthur The Twilight Galaxy Motel Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted September 20, 2016 Report Share Posted September 20, 2016 Now the boys are at their new home, can not wait to see what happens. I did not see the differances coming. The two arms and two sets of fangs was interresting. I hope we get to see more about the 17 other places. Another remarkable chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted September 21, 2016 Report Share Posted September 21, 2016 After watching " V" years ago , I was afraid the Young boys here were going to be " Earth Takeaway Meals " ! I look forward to the next chapter . Cheers, . Johnny C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted September 26, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2016 Arthur The Twilight Galaxy Motel Chapter 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted September 27, 2016 Report Share Posted September 27, 2016 Now we are getting a better picture of the boys new life. This is an awsome story. I do not see why more are not reading. It is sorly over looked. This last chapter is as good as any in Dummer Boy. Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 3, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2016 Arthur The Twilight Galaxy Motel Chapter 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 4, 2016 Report Share Posted October 4, 2016 Wow, what a story. I did not see this coming. It is just an outstanding read. It is just a must read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 10, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2016 Arthur The Twilight Galaxy Motel Chapter 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 11, 2016 Report Share Posted October 11, 2016 What a shame, tbis story ended way to soon. As a fan of Arthur I think this story has been over looked by the readers. It is outstanding if one is into sifi as I am. Nice work Arthur in this and the other storys you wright. Al Norris and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 12, 2016 Report Share Posted October 12, 2016 Arthur , Thank you for the Last & Final Chapter ! Great Sci-Fi Reading ,I look forward to any new submitted stories in the future, . Cheers, . John C Al Norris and Jay 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaayson Posted November 5, 2016 Report Share Posted November 5, 2016 Twilight Galaxy Motel was quite an enjoyable book. In light of current political events in the US, I found it helpful to think there might just be a chance for some humans to survive, if x wins. Al Norris and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dtm180 Posted December 16, 2016 Report Share Posted December 16, 2016 Wow, This is a fantastic read Arthur, I am sorry that more of this story is not to be expected but still the story as-is, is a fantastic read. Great work. Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.