Zach Caldwell Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 Gary Conder At the Turning Chapter 1 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 Hello Gary , Great start to your new story , Will wait patiently for the next chapter, . Cheers, . Johnny C Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 A very well wright story indeed. An excellent start. I have always like a historic themed tail. This one with Jock McBride seems very interesting. I to can hardly wait for the next chapter it has cought my interests. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 16, 2017 Report Share Posted October 16, 2017 Gary Conder At the Turning Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 17, 2017 Report Share Posted October 17, 2017 I knew I was going to enjoy this story. A lot going on in it, but still you can easily follow everything in your mind. You can picture in your head everything going on and can relate to what is happening. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 23, 2017 Report Share Posted October 23, 2017 Gary Conder At the Turning Chapter 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 24, 2017 Report Share Posted October 24, 2017 Well it looks as if the plan to take native works has not gone as planed. The twins are up to mischief that could back fire on them. We will return to see what happens. Will the old man get his workers, time will tell. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 30, 2017 Report Share Posted October 30, 2017 Gary Conder At The Turning Chapter 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 1, 2017 Report Share Posted November 1, 2017 A very enjoyable chapter. Lachlan has now learned a secret about his father Jack. He was informed of his up coming trip. His shock of the trip and what he had seen set heavy on him. Now we wait to see what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 6, 2017 Report Share Posted November 6, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted November 13, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted November 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2017 Gary Conder At the Turning Chapter 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 22, 2017 Report Share Posted November 22, 2017 A very enjoyable light read. We find Lachlan at sea for the first time. He is doing well much better than his brothers had done. It seems no matter where he goes he can not get away from the shadow of his father. I just wonder if he is up to this job. Will he enslave people to to make the next pound for his father? We will come back and see next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 27, 2017 Report Share Posted November 27, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 29, 2017 Report Share Posted November 29, 2017 Toby and Lachlan got to know each other that night much better. Lachlan nor Mr. Simpson had much for what they have come to do. Both under McBrides thumb and doing his will. As the ship is ancored in the bay a lot of thoughts was passed that night. Till next time we return. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted December 4, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted December 5, 2017 Report Share Posted December 5, 2017 The trip is a bust as far as getting workers go. They have out rum ships of war. The storm they were unable to out run. Loss of a crewman and the waves crashing upon the decks. The crew is forced below. We will have to return to find out how much damage has been done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted December 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted December 12, 2017 Report Share Posted December 12, 2017 With the ship gone. The crew making it to shore and spitting up. Young McBride is about to make it home. What will his father say? Will Lachlen stand up to his father at last? We will find out next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted December 18, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted December 19, 2017 Report Share Posted December 19, 2017 We see Lachlan is back home. He has got the natives willing to work for him. So far his father has not said much as one would have believed. There is still time I am sure. We will come back and see next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted December 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2017 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted December 26, 2017 Report Share Posted December 26, 2017 At last we see Lachlan show his back bone. Telling off William in a way that was without question what he ment. What will his father Jock have to say about this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted January 1, 2018 Report Share Posted January 1, 2018 Gary Conder "At The Turning" Chapter 13 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted January 2, 2018 Report Share Posted January 2, 2018 A very interesting chapter. The way the twins exchanged places. The news of the teacher. Looks as if Lachlan is getting a bit niffed at his family. I wonder if one day he confronts his father. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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