Fist of all YOU'RE AMAZING STORY AMAZING . This is a good story that can get and collect things to our lives than reading boring same "love making scenes" throughout the story. When it comes to your writing Its perfect. No doubts at all.. Please keep this writing style throughout the story. Only thing I would like to say is don't stop writing this amazing story. keep it as long as you could write. one of the two Best stories I ever read. God bless your for your talent!
A fan with love and blessings!
