Castle Herald Posted April 9, 2015 Report Share Posted April 9, 2015 (edited) [Special Note: The new website is now live. As a result the links throughout this thread are invalid except for the latest posting to the thread. All of Jack Schaeffer stories can now be found at Jack Schaeffer] Chapter 1 presented by http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Edited October 5, 2017 by Zach Caldwell Link website notification Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted April 11, 2015 Report Share Posted April 11, 2015 Got my interest in one chapter even with a little cliffhanger lets get to this meeting and let the fireworks begin Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Niteowl, Glad you liked it. This book will have more drama and intrigue, as well as the romance between Jack and Sam. New characters coming as well. It will be interesting to see Jack come into his own and start to lead his team. Thanks for reading...and posting. Always appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2015 Chapter 2 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted April 17, 2015 Report Share Posted April 17, 2015 You have improved your cliffhangers Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted April 17, 2015 Report Share Posted April 17, 2015 This last one was a biggie. But I never, ever plan them. To be honest, I remember writing this scene, with Jack and Sam discussing the concept of family, and in my mind's eye, I see Todd come flying out of the office into the elevator lobby. I waited until I "heard" in my head what it was he was going to say (I had nothing planned) and I just typed it out. I then looked at the screen and said out loud to myself, "Damn, I hope he makes it. I didn't see that coming." I was just as shocked as everyone else is. You'll have to read the next chapter to see if he survives...grin. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 23, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2015 Chapter 3 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2015 Chapter 4 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted May 4, 2015 Report Share Posted May 4, 2015 Still reading and injoying more please Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2015 Chapter 5 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
denis_p Posted May 14, 2015 Report Share Posted May 14, 2015 Jack Schaeffer "Changes" Book 2 of Forever Chapter 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2015 Chapter 7 presented by http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 28, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 Chapter 8 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 Way to get the blood flowing great read Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 Way to get the blood flowing great read NiteOwl, Thanks. Glad you're still liking the story. This last chapter really ramped up the drama and suspense, and the next one takes to a whole other level. Can't wait to see what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 I just knew we hadn't seen the last of Arnold Turner... This guy is a true villian! Now we have to wait for Chapter 9 to see if they can catch the jerk... Unless Jack is going to string us all along for a couple more chapters. Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
denis_p Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 Jack Schaeffer "Changes" Book 2 of Forever Chapter 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted June 7, 2015 Report Share Posted June 7, 2015 I know you said chapter 9 was going to be Intense but WOW I went from looking over a cliff to hitting my head on the ceiling in one chapter You did give me a scare towards the end of this chapter I thought the story was ending glad you have more to say Great Read thanks Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted June 8, 2015 Report Share Posted June 8, 2015 I know you said chapter 9 was going to be Intense but WOW I went from looking over a cliff to hitting my head on the ceiling in one chapter You did give me a scare towards the end of this chapter I thought the story was ending glad you have more to say Great Read thanks NiteOwl, So glad you liked it! It was a challenging chapter to write. So many expectations of what was going to happen to Turner and the guys. Not to give anything away to someone who may read this before actually reading the chapter, but the ending was NOT planned! Jack took matters into his own hands - that was all his doing. I had long anticipated the same result, but by way of Turner doing the deed himself, as a way to guilt Andrew. But as so often happens now with this story, the characters write their own version of events and I become their dutiful scribe. Next chapter underway. Stay tuned. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted June 15, 2015 Report Share Posted June 15, 2015 Great Story Jack. Really like it. Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted June 16, 2015 Report Share Posted June 16, 2015 Great Story Jack. Really like it. Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoying the ride with us. I'm having a lot of fun telling this story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Schaeffer Posted June 16, 2015 Report Share Posted June 16, 2015 Next chapter is underway - about half finished. Look for it in about two weeks or so. Thanks for reading! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted June 29, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2015 Chapter 10 found at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/jack_schaeffer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve T. Posted June 30, 2015 Report Share Posted June 30, 2015 Jack I'm really enjoying this one! Forever 1 was excellent and set up a lot about the relationship between Jack and Sam. You mentioned in a reply earlier that this one was darker. You weren't kidding! This one is full of action and suspense. Nice job. Glad to see that Turner has been taken care of. I read an article recently that said that CEOs (or wanna-be CEOs) have one of the highest incidences of sociopathy in this country. I think Arnold "fucking" Turner fit that exactly. What in the hell was Jack thinking going out into the woods alone to find Sam? Who did he think he was, Daniel Boone? Glad that Sam found him. Let's hope they make it through the night and make it back safely. Steve Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted June 30, 2015 Report Share Posted June 30, 2015 Ok the trash has been taken out now we find out if Sam is that good in the wild Jack Schaeffer 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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