Mark C. Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Wow, a couple of,them, way to go! grin.... ken barber 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Twinkies are junk food but twinks are gourmet dining!! Way to go , Ken! ken barber 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Ken thanks a lot for having two stories I want chapters for I am so confused as to which story to ask you to write for ken barber 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted February 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 Well Niteowl you can ask for either but I will warn you I dont really write by request. but feel free to ask as much as you wish. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 Will threats work ken barber 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 NiteOwl13, I don't think threats will work, (see post #43) so that leaves just food, sex or money. To cover all three, one of us could volunteer to feed him a home cooked meal, naked except for a fan of $1,000 bills covering sensitive areas, grin..... NiteOwl13, ken barber and Jeikor 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted March 1, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2015 Chapter 3 is in edit and will be posted soon. Every keep your britches on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted March 1, 2015 Report Share Posted March 1, 2015 Hooray.... See everyone, he can be reasonable, grin.... ken barber 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted March 5, 2015 Report Share Posted March 5, 2015 Chapter 3 explore at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/ken_barber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted March 6, 2015 Report Share Posted March 6, 2015 WOW a fast action chapter and faster read well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted March 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2015 WOW a fast action chapter and faster read well done Thank you very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted March 15, 2015 Report Share Posted March 15, 2015 I just finished a re-reread of Cyclone book 1 and 2 Damm if I didn't miss one word that changed my outlook on the chapter and changed book 2 for the better Reread of this action from the start flows much better than a reread of the last chapter Thanks for a great read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted March 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 Thank you night owl. I am really glad you enjoyed it and I am curious what you missed that changed the outlook so much on your first read through Zach Caldwell 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted June 7, 2015 Report Share Posted June 7, 2015 Sorry I did not see this post I miss this I saw Doug Mathis standing there with a gun. I started book 2 thinking it was the cartel attacking speaking of book 2 is a new chapter on the horizon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted June 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2015 speaking of book 2 is a new chapter on the horizon Yes somewhere between "Dawns Early Light" "Black Pearl" "Fog of War" and about 6 shorts I have in the works lies another chapter of "Cyclone 2" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve T. Posted June 19, 2015 Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 Like Nightowl, above, I started over and re-read book one again. I know I had read it before but I needed to get everything fresh in my mind again before I went on to book two. Great story! Love the action of this one. That was absolutely the shortest vacation I've ever heard of! Poor guys. They just can't get any downtime. My only question is: Where the hell were all of these gay guys when I was in my twenties? I guess to answer my own question, they weren't in the Army with me. In fact, the Army was a TERRIBLE place to pick up guys in the 80's and 90's. Too bad I didn't think of that back then. ken barber and Al Norris 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted June 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 Steve T, Thanks for the Input while I did have a couple "Friends" in the army in the 90's most of us hide as much as possible. Dale says it often he feels like he is running a gay dating service. Chapter 4 will be posted next week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 Chapter 4 found at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/ken_barber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted June 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2015 Well here is chapter 4 hope you all enjoy it. Please let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted June 26, 2015 Report Share Posted June 26, 2015 Very good chapter. It was chill and fun chapter with hardly any drama. Which leads to me feel like there are bombshells to come in later chapters. This chapter felt like it was luring me into a false sense of security only to have the rug pulled out later. I do wonder though if there are too many people within the story. I find it hard to keep up with who everyone is and who they may or may not be in a relationship with or how they relate to the main characters. I wonder if not being able to keep track of them is a result of not getting chapters regularly. If your story were a novel I would be constantly engaged in it and thus better keep track of who all the players are. In this online forum, with chapters not always flowing, the attention is diverted to other stories and and thus the flow of characters gets lost. Regardless, I love the story and eagerly await the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted June 26, 2015 Report Share Posted June 26, 2015 A new enemy that just does not understand but they will I got a kick out of Head Man asking them to take it slow Good read thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted June 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 Zach, Thanks for the feed back. I have added alot of character over the chapters mostly because I want to create the Charismatic Authority Concept. To really show it Dale has to have lots of "Followers" The main Characters always rise to the top and the story does focus on them the most. Night Owl just wanted to add a sense that Dale and team are shaking up the world on a pretty big level, Thanks guys for your feed back and input I love it keep giving it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fr. Dave Posted January 23, 2016 Report Share Posted January 23, 2016 I hope you will be posting more of Cyclone soon! This is my favorite of all your stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted January 27, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2016 Fr. Dave. Thank you for your comment. Cyclone is one of those stories that hits me a random moments and I write a little each time. Chapter 5 is in the works and has been for a long time.Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted April 5, 2016 Report Share Posted April 5, 2016 We have lost book 2 in the library Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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