David McLeod Posted December 25, 2014 Report Posted December 25, 2014 Ken has a good "feel" for military culture and a fine way of presenting it. It's a captivating story, and quite nice to know a little bit about what else is/has been going on elsewhere in the Revolutions Universe.
ken barber Posted December 26, 2014 Report Posted December 26, 2014 So far through Chapter 3... And very possible sounding, in light of the Revolution setting. . Very well done so far, Ken. I love the story, Ken!! Can't wait to read the rest! thank you
ken barber Posted December 26, 2014 Report Posted December 26, 2014 Ken has a good "feel" for military culture and a fine way of presenting it. It's a captivating story, and quite nice to know a little bit about what else is/has been going on elsewhere in the Revolutions Universe. thanks
Castle Herald Posted December 30, 2014 Report Posted December 30, 2014 Chapter 9 now presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/ken_barber
Mark C. Posted December 30, 2014 Report Posted December 30, 2014 Yeah, another chapter! Ken, you made my day. Was going to be a slow night but not now!! After dishes get washed, settling down with chocolate mousse and this new chapter! ken barber 1
D'Artagnon Posted December 31, 2014 Report Posted December 31, 2014 A chapter of subtle changes and building sense of purpose for our heroes. Funny, full of heart and hope. Just what Norris and Company need for the difficult days to come. But you get the sense that this is not only what they live for, but they're more than up to the challenge. Bucky is the epitome of what a Naval Officer should be in the face of adversity, Grace Under Pressure. Can't wait to see what happens next. ken barber and Mark C. 2
ken barber Posted December 31, 2014 Report Posted December 31, 2014 Thank you all so much I know I have not been very responsive life has gotten in the way as of late. D'Artagnon and Mark C. 2
Mark C. Posted December 31, 2014 Report Posted December 31, 2014 Ken, no apologies ever! I know everyone has an outside life and just thrilled you can find whatever time you can. You honor us, sir. ken barber 1
Jack Schaeffer Posted January 7, 2015 Report Posted January 7, 2015 Ken, Just finished the story - at least as far as what has posted. It's getting old to say I love your writing, but there it is - I do! I know it's good because when I get down to the end of a chapter my eye goes to the link for "Next Chapter". I don't hesitate - I just click it! The latest chapter left me wanting more. The entire premise frankly made me so angry at first I wasn't sure I could read the rest. But I settled down and dug in, mostly because I was already enamored with Bucky and Norris and the way they operate. Reminded me of Mitch Rapp (Vince Flynn), some of my favorite books. I did get bogged down in all the names of the ships and the officers, but decided to sort of mentally filter all that out and just read for the main characters and the overall plot. Then it got fun - a lot of fun. I'm glad you have the "good" guys winning and you did a masterful and realistic job of setting up a plausible scenario for how this horrible and unthinkable sequence of events could happen. I was shocked at my own reaction to the idea of chemical weapons or WMDs being used on American cities. My mind couldn't fully grasp the horror of it at first, but then when it started to penetrate, I didn't want it to anymore. Horrifying! The brightest spot for me - so far - was Kevin in the pilot seat, giving out instructions. That scene made me cry happy tears. I LOVED THAT! It was a moment of humanity in a story full on inhumanity. Brilliant stuff! Can't wait for more. (Am I to understand that this story is merging with two others for operation "And Justice for All"?) When does that arrive? And will this story continue? Should I read the other two stories first before "And Justice for All"?) ken barber and Mark C. 2
ken barber Posted January 7, 2015 Report Posted January 7, 2015 Jack, thank you. That is high praise indeed coming from such a fantastic author. The first few chapters were like a parade of introductions but I needed to get the scope of the players out of the way. The rest focus predominately on Norris and his inner circle. Yes this story merges with two others "changing connections" by Eric Aune and "new beginnings" by Roland. The merged story is a special mini series called "and justice for all" it's nine parts long and the release starts on January 19 with a new chapter being released each day for 9 days. I would recommend ready the other two stories so you are familiar with those characters as well. Jack Schaeffer 1
Mark C. Posted January 8, 2015 Report Posted January 8, 2015 Ken, I have just finished reading all three stories and can not wait for "Justice"! I love Norris and everyone! It will be interesting how you handle an Ashwood counterattack in Florida, since he probably will.... Lots of plot possibilities,,grin.... ken barber 1
Al Norris Posted January 8, 2015 Report Posted January 8, 2015 While it is definitely to your advantage to have read all three stories, JFA (what we staff call it for short) is also a complete story in itself... You just won't have the full impact if you haven't read them. The whole storyline has been through many revisions in thought, action and plot, before the major theme was settled. This is also a way to celebrate the 2nd anniversary of the Revolutions Universe, as the the final installment of the mini-series concludes on that date. While it may seem trite to say it, this is gonna blow you all out of the water! Mark C. 1
Mark C. Posted January 8, 2015 Report Posted January 8, 2015 Alan, I can not wait! Ok. So,I really have to wait but with Anticipation! Sorry, won't blow me out of the water since I don't swim but I suspect JFA will be better than the most orgasmic bite of chocolate! I bet the plot line discussion must have been interesting, to say the least. Dis you all almost come to blows over it, grin.... Thanks for the teaser... You are evil, grin....
Mark C. Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Ken, can we all hibernate until the 19th? Sigh..... Can not wait... Heavier sigh....
Al Norris Posted January 12, 2015 Report Posted January 12, 2015 Mark? If you hibernate, you will miss all the other good stories that are being published between now and then! Mark C. 1
ken barber Posted January 12, 2015 Report Posted January 12, 2015 Mark, No hibernating. Read Read Read. Mark C. 1
Jeikor Posted January 13, 2015 Report Posted January 13, 2015 I thought that was what hibernating was for- to read, read, read!!! And boy have I been reading; just finished all 9 chapters (as well as the 13 chapters of 'Changing Connections') in about two weeks to be ready for the RU anniversary event. Had already read Roland's RU story. Great story here, Ken! Every bit as good as I thought 'Cyclone' was. Cannot wait for the big event!! ken barber 1
ken barber Posted January 13, 2015 Report Posted January 13, 2015 Jeikor, Thank you very much. One more chapter of "Dawns Early Light" Before "And Justice For All." "And Justice for All" or JFA as we call it, is probably the largest most complicated project I have ever seen or been a part of. For those that are not aware All three authors of JFA will be on a live chat on 02/01/15 Here are the details. Please come join us. Mark C. 1
Mark C. Posted January 13, 2015 Report Posted January 13, 2015 Ken, how did you like being involved in such a large project? Must have been so different from working on your own, on your own story. Would you do it again? Aspects you liked, aspects not so great? ken barber 1
ken barber Posted January 13, 2015 Report Posted January 13, 2015 Well mark we will discuss that during the chat on Sunday 2/1. Will you be joining us?
Mark C. Posted January 14, 2015 Report Posted January 14, 2015 Yes.... Can join you..... ken barber 1
Jack Schaeffer Posted January 14, 2015 Report Posted January 14, 2015 Could you possibly have a transcript of the conversation from the JFA get together for those of us who would love to be a part but can't. I know I personally would love to be able to be there, but my schedule will not allow. My guess is the conversation will be fascinating.
ken barber Posted January 14, 2015 Report Posted January 14, 2015 Jack the conversation will be recorded and we can get you a copy. I think. I would be willing to consider a second chat if enough people wanted it. Jack Schaeffer 1
Jack Schaeffer Posted January 14, 2015 Report Posted January 14, 2015 Ken, I fear my schedule will usually conflict with others, so a transcript will be perfect for me, if at all possible. I think the idea of collaborative writing is intriguing. I'd love to try my hand it sometime, if there is ever another situation. Of course, my style of story so far is nothing like the Revolutions Universe, but perhaps a different type of connection between writers might happen in the future... WolfLover 1
Castle Herald Posted January 16, 2015 Report Posted January 16, 2015 Chapter 10 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/ken_barber
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