JP Caballero Posted September 28, 2020 Report Share Posted September 28, 2020 Castle Roland present A new author Keith Yates and his story Devyn’s Struggle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talo Segura Posted September 29, 2020 Report Share Posted September 29, 2020 If you like realistic drama I would check this story out: Devyns Struggle. It's an exciting, engaging opening chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted October 1, 2020 Report Share Posted October 1, 2020 Devyn's Struggle has a rather unique history. Originally, it was a Nifty story. For whatever reasons, last January the Powers-That-Be over there, pulled the story. Keith started re-writing the story. I contacted him and have had 2 of our editors go over his chapters. What is now on nifty from chapters 1 through 28 have not been edited. All chapters on our site have been edited. Having Read the original, I can speculate why the story was pulled (based on Nifty's submission criteria), but it would only be a guess. Regardless, what Keith has done in version 2 of his story, makes it a much better story than version 1. Keith has allowed us to post a chapter with every update, up to and including chapter 15. Then we will fall back and post a chapter once a week. This way Keith has time to write more chapters. I believe those that start reading this story will be amazed that the character, Devyn, survived his ordeal after being kicked out of his home and disowned by his parents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talo Segura Posted October 6, 2020 Report Share Posted October 6, 2020 Just read chapter three and the story is building nicely with a look back into Devyn's past when he was much happier and was about to make a new friend. This story looks like including all the familiar storylines rolled into one: new boy in the neighbourhood, self-discovery, coming to terms, coming out, rejection, a fall into Hell, abuse, and redemption. Wow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted September 9, 2021 Report Share Posted September 9, 2021 If you have been following this story, the Castle is now 1 chapter ahead of what is on Nifty. Not entirely sure how this happened, but there we are! In other news, watch for the companion story, Brent's Struggle, to go live very soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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