Castle Herald Posted December 12, 2014 Report Share Posted December 12, 2014 Chapter 14 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S Littlejohn Posted December 12, 2014 Report Share Posted December 12, 2014 Ok Roland that last 1 (14)is not fair lol. I have waited 2 week for this fight and not 1 blow landed. Really like the story though. I really like Kandric too and can't wait for new instalments of that story either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted December 12, 2014 Report Share Posted December 12, 2014 Roland Do all you authors take lessons on were to put cliffs Thanks for adding a story to this world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted December 13, 2014 Report Share Posted December 13, 2014 Well see.. it's like this. WE hold classes once a month with the other authors. the classes are taught by the resident evil author and master of misdirection. When i showed him this one, he told me i got a 6 out of 10 for it, and that i should really work harder to hone my craft. I am sorry for letting my instructor and the readers down, but i promise i will try much harder next time. denis_p and NiteOwl13 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Chapter 15 now presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 You totally weren't kidding about the gore. I don't believe I've seen any scene in the main Kandric Universe that even holds a candle to that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 oh boy... now you've done it. you threw down the gauntlet to Kyle.... well.... we'll have to wait and see what he come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Don't get me wrong, Kyle still has the upper hand when it comes to epic-type battles. This one is just... tremendously gory! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rilbur Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Don't get me wrong, Kyle still has the upper hand when it comes to epic-type battles. This one is just... tremendously gory! As gory as exploding one dragon's poison sack to kill another? Not so sure about that myself... as I recall, Kandric wound up coated in blood from that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 At least its breastbone was still fully intact, and viscera remained mostly where they belonged in the abdominal cavity. Maybe the Glaster arena fight came close, but we were spared the details Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted January 10, 2015 Report Share Posted January 10, 2015 spared the details?!?! where is the fun in that?! remember.. the Devil is in the entrails.. as they say... wait.. did i get that right? oh well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted January 10, 2015 Report Share Posted January 10, 2015 Hey! I warned everyone about this chapter!! Ya read it? Gotta deal with it. Muaaah haa haa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted January 31, 2015 Report Share Posted January 31, 2015 So I was just thinking, do we actually have some sort of indication about the equivalent ages of this band of dragon juveniles and their friends? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted February 6, 2015 Report Share Posted February 6, 2015 Chapter 16 presented for you http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted February 7, 2015 Report Share Posted February 7, 2015 Thanks for adding to this world the more the better and I agree you have a small edge on gore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoM Posted February 10, 2015 Report Share Posted February 10, 2015 First off, Love your story, but so did I with Kandric, and have sent Kyle a few emails about that story earlier. Now it is to much time between the chapters, so I don't find the small things the editors forgets. But, with shorter chapters, and a day in the bed due to flu, i reread this story. (yes, even the ghosts can catch the flu) And made a few disconnections. From Prologue Below him, his Father, a Legendary Echelon Sorcerer, and the greatest of the Sand Dragons in the Kingdom of Seandra, fought hard to protect the city. Thousands of Orcs, Gnolls, and other creatures fell beneath his spells, claws, and horrible breath weapon. But the Dark Mage allies of the Browns were busy animating the dead, only to send them back into the battle. From chapter 4 "There were eight Echelons, with ten Steps between." Xavier said as they rode along. "After Proficient, there was Skilled, Instruction, Accomplished, Renowned, and finally Supreme. I had just passed my Skilled Step three test." He then looked at Lew who was looking at him wide eyed. "How many Echelons and steps are there now?" "Seven, but there are only five Steps between. Training, Primary, Secondary, Teaching, Expert, Master, and finally Legendary." Lew said as he fingered his guild pin. "I am Primary Step 4." Lew said as he looked around at the group. Legendary Echelon? Shouldn't that be Supreme? Legendary came a few thousands year later? He is in Chapter 5: "Xavier was pacing, but no one could miss the pain and haunted look on his face as he recalled what had happened. "Then the final battle came. They had breached the walls. We tried to hold the breech, but it was not to be. We had lost so many, and the Browns were not above simply sending our dead back at us. When the walls came down, my Father, King Rathort, a Supreme Echelon Sorcerer, and Great Sand Dragon took to the field. Thousands fell beneath his claws, spells and Breath weapon." From Prologue He banked hard, so he could keep the fight directly below him. The Brown Dragons had invaded his home many years ago, and had slowly beat the Seandrain Forcers back, until all that remained not in their control was the Capital itself. And now, the great city was in danger of being over run with the Browns and their minions. From chapter 1 "Xavier nodded and turned once more to look out over the City. The fires were already burning on the south part of the city. They had already evacuated all those that could, and would flee, to the tunnels beneath the City, with luck, and enough time, brought by those who stayed behind, they would be able to make it to the only city that had yet to fall. The Great City of Sand Storm was the main Mining and Trade port for the Kingdom. From Sandstorm, hopefully those that fled would find refuge." Sand Storm is written in two different ways, and is sand a city in the kingdom? Since it only was the capital city (which can't be Sand Storm) that wasn't overrun? Ghost of Morten. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted March 5, 2015 Report Share Posted March 5, 2015 Chapter 17 explore at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted March 6, 2015 Report Share Posted March 6, 2015 Looks like the group is going to get bigger a GOOD but short read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted March 6, 2015 Report Share Posted March 6, 2015 I'm getting to the point where I now need to reread the whole thing and create a cheat sheet. I didn't recognize half the characters in the chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 9, 2015 Report Share Posted April 9, 2015 Chapter 18 presented by http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted April 11, 2015 Report Share Posted April 11, 2015 Two lost fields after some training I fill bad for whatever group that attacks this caravan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted April 11, 2015 Report Share Posted April 11, 2015 Huh, and I thought we'd be getting a sneak peek into what the Legionnaire field is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 7, 2015 Report Share Posted May 7, 2015 Chapter 19 presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zergrinch Posted May 9, 2015 Report Share Posted May 9, 2015 Do my eyes deceive me? Did we learn what Kandric's mysterious additional field was, before it was revealed in the saga itself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted May 9, 2015 Report Share Posted May 9, 2015 perhaps.... but seriously, do you think we would ever make things THAT easy for people... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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