Anjobranco Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 I do not know, but something it is not right on this sentence? "Good Morning Mr. Marshal, I am sorry I didn't return your call. But I promise I was going to you, didn't have come all the way out here just to talk to me." By my smile he could tell I was teasing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
techmanjoy Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 Hmm, you are right there is something off there. It may be that it should be "But I promise I was going to to; you didn't have to come all the way out here just to talk to me." I'll make sure an editor sees this and get's it fixed. Thanks for pointing it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chip321 Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 the comma is in the wrong place But I promise I was going to, , Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
techmanjoy Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 We have recieved a revised copy of this chapter from the author and will have it updated as soon as possible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted May 8, 2014 Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Hello Everyone, I want to thank you for pointing out those mistake so I can get the story cleaned up. Other than those little issues I hope you are enjoying it. Ken B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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