Anjobranco Posted May 7, 2014 Report Posted May 7, 2014 I do not know, but something it is not right on this sentence? "Good Morning Mr. Marshal, I am sorry I didn't return your call. But I promise I was going to you, didn't have come all the way out here just to talk to me." By my smile he could tell I was teasing.
techmanjoy Posted May 7, 2014 Report Posted May 7, 2014 Hmm, you are right there is something off there. It may be that it should be "But I promise I was going to to; you didn't have to come all the way out here just to talk to me." I'll make sure an editor sees this and get's it fixed. Thanks for pointing it out!
Guest chip321 Posted May 7, 2014 Report Posted May 7, 2014 the comma is in the wrong place But I promise I was going to, ,
techmanjoy Posted May 7, 2014 Report Posted May 7, 2014 We have recieved a revised copy of this chapter from the author and will have it updated as soon as possible.
ken barber Posted May 8, 2014 Report Posted May 8, 2014 Hello Everyone, I want to thank you for pointing out those mistake so I can get the story cleaned up. Other than those little issues I hope you are enjoying it. Ken B
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