Castle Herald Posted February 8, 2018 Report Share Posted February 8, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 1 & 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 9, 2018 Report Share Posted February 9, 2018 A very strong start to this story. Jon and Jeremiah"s relationship developed very quickly. Jeremiah and his church reminds me of the Westburo Church. You can not but fill degustation when thinking of such short minded and self righteous. It is a enjoyable read that makes one think and relate to segments of our culture today. How when confronted with the facts the less than open minded will change their respective sometimes. At times they not due to influences pressured upon then by others or self imposed. We will see what happens next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted February 9, 2018 Report Share Posted February 9, 2018 The Westboro Baptist Church is the most bigoted so called "christian" church that I know of. While it is not the only one, sad to say, it is by far the worst of the lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted February 12, 2018 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 3 & 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 13, 2018 Report Share Posted February 13, 2018 WOW, I could not believe a mother could act like that in court. Then she keeps Davy away from his father with lies and resentment to his father. To bad to say but I can see this happening in real life. I know that they are churches like that one in this story out there. I can not see people being fooled into believing such. The question is will people at the Church make problems for Davy and his new family? We will return to find out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted February 15, 2018 Report Share Posted February 15, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 5 & 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 17, 2018 Report Share Posted February 17, 2018 A very fast pasted two chapters. We see Mavis call upon an elder of her church to kidnap Davey. We see the church is falling apart due to the lack of leadership. I can see that happening. I would think such a bigoted church with such unconventional ideas is hard to find a leader. We saw that a number of other young men came forward to tell their interaction with the perverts. Jon and Davey now has a young gay tutor. Wonder who Harrison is maybe Cade boyfriend? I am enjoying this story very much and look forward to reading more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted February 19, 2018 Report Share Posted February 19, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 7 & 8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 22, 2018 Report Share Posted February 22, 2018 A lot has transpired in these two chapters. Jim and Todd has moved in with one another. Two collage guys took the apparent down stairs. Davy's grandparent's has moved back to the US after retirement. Davy was re-baptised. both Jon and Davy are taking part in Rite 13. We will return to find our more the next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted February 22, 2018 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 9 & 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 25, 2018 Report Share Posted February 25, 2018 The grand rents got a new car and a lake house and property. The boy e joyed their visit with them and returned for school. We see the swim coach makes then uneasy. They will keep their eye out for any thing out of place. We will see if they were right next time maybe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted February 26, 2018 Report Share Posted February 26, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 11 & 12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted February 27, 2018 Report Share Posted February 27, 2018 A very emotional two chapters. Mark was almost raped but the boys saved him. Mark has a way to go to cope with what has happened. Jon and Davy's help has went a long ways in meeting that goal. The school dance went much better than I thought it would. This is turning out to be a much better story than I was first to believe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 1, 2018 Report Share Posted March 1, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 13 & 14 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted March 4, 2018 Report Share Posted March 4, 2018 What an interesting and enjoyable couple of chapters. Looks is if Mark and Joe are going to be very good friends. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted March 5, 2018 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 15 & 16 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted March 7, 2018 Report Share Posted March 7, 2018 A wonderfully emotionally filled chapters. The boys are getting along quite well. Now that everything has worked itself out in the manner it was intended to. I look forward to seeing more of the story next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 8, 2018 Report Share Posted March 8, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 17 & 18 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted March 11, 2018 Report Share Posted March 11, 2018 A totally action filled chapter. I enjoyed both chapter from the very start. I do not wish to spoil anything so you will have to read it yourself. Time well spent in doing so. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 12, 2018 Report Share Posted March 12, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 19 & 20 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted March 13, 2018 Report Share Posted March 13, 2018 Hello David , Thank you again for another heartfelt series , I spent the afternoon reading the latest 6 chapter. Keep up the great work , I look forward to more chapters Jon & Davy's lives, . Cheers, . John Celestre Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 15, 2018 Report Share Posted March 15, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 21 & 22 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 19, 2018 Report Share Posted March 19, 2018 David Lee"Metamorphosis" Chapters 23 & 24 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted March 22, 2018 Report Share Posted March 22, 2018 A very educational and enjoyable read. The boys are well balanced and well grounded. The story is filled with good advice for anyone to take. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted March 22, 2018 Report Share Posted March 22, 2018 David Lee "Metamorphosis" Chapters 25 and 26 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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