Al Norris Posted February 24, 2018 Report Share Posted February 24, 2018 I have to say that I am surprised, that no one has commented on this story, as a whole, or chapter 14 specifically. I mean, we knew right from chapter 1, that something horrific was going to happen. And here it has. Not the way I had envisioned it, however. I felt so sad over what had happened to our two lovers before they were able to actually be together. But then to have David so senselessly beaten to death... It's unfortunate that we live in a society that can't seem to let people live the lives they want. That differences in sexual attraction are so often met with violence in one form or another. Bill, this chapter left me in tears. Good writing. Al. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted February 26, 2018 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2018 Bill W "A Tragic Love" Chapter 15 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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