Castle Herald Posted October 24, 2016 Report Share Posted October 24, 2016 (edited) [Special Note: The new website is now live. As a result the links throughout this thread are invalid except for the latest posting to the thread. All of Multimapper stories can now be found at MultiMapper] MultiMapper Heritance The Alliance arrives Chapter 1 Edited October 6, 2017 by Zach Caldwell Link website notification Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted October 25, 2016 Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 I enjoyed the first chapter very much. Bitru is very down to earth, and Brandton tipical preteen. This story makes you think where it may be headed. So many ways this could go. Now you have my interest up I will comr back to see what the true plot maybe. As I have said a very enjoyable read. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 25, 2016 Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 I 2nd Jay , I like Bitru very much I look forward to the next chapter in this new Story . I want to know about the chilling effect too, . Cheers, . John C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 31, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2016 MultiMapper Heritance Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 1, 2016 Report Share Posted November 1, 2016 Thank you for posting this latest chapter ! Poor Bitru ...lol Moving to America Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 1, 2016 Report Share Posted November 1, 2016 I enjoyed the newest chapter. It is somewhat to true in todays schools. When first reading Brandons remarks. I thought he must be pulling Bitru leg. Sadly it seems he was not. Look forward to just see how bad things become. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 7, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2016 MultiMapper Heritance Chapter 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 8, 2016 Report Share Posted November 8, 2016 A true school from hell. A somewhat solem and depressing read. I would hope that they are no places like what is discribed in this story. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 8, 2016 Report Share Posted November 8, 2016 It was some interesting reading here . I could see this happening in some southern states though Jay , But I hope not . I look forward to reading more chapters soon and see how Bitru maintains his hopes/dreams of attending Public school , . Cheers, . John C Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MultiMapper Posted November 8, 2016 Report Share Posted November 8, 2016 Although the school depicted in the story isn't based on one school in particular, the situations at the school are based on real events from various sources. What I'm saying is that what's being portrayed isn't outside the realm of possibility. There's a particular youtube video with drug sniffing dogs and police that was absolutely horrifying. I wouldn't be surprised if some of those kids needed therapy after that experience. Jay and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 MultiMapper Heritance Chapter 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 15, 2016 Report Share Posted November 15, 2016 Thank you for posting the latest chapter ! Bitru is doing his best to survive his 1st day of American style Public School !, . Cheers, . John C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 15, 2016 Report Share Posted November 15, 2016 I enjoyed the chapter very much. I think the story is is showing the poor boys doing the best they can to cope. I do not think I myself know I could not cope. Sorry, I got a bit mad reading about their school. The wast of funding here depicked are sorrowifly much to true. The mindly system and the push to acheaeve a standered quoe is so to real today. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted November 22, 2016 Report Share Posted November 22, 2016 MultiMapper Heritance Chapter 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 22, 2016 Report Share Posted November 22, 2016 Thank you for posting the latest chapter ! Interesting conversations going on now , Cannot wait to see what the boys do at Grandma's house ...lol . Happy Thanksgiving , . John C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 22, 2016 Report Share Posted November 22, 2016 WOW, a very good chapter. The kids are getting a new school, and now something new and unknown. It keeps you wanting more. This is why I keep coming back. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 28, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2016 MultiMapper Heritance Chapter 6 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 Multimapper , Another Great Chapter ! I love Thier Grandma too with all the family " magic " & spice cookies . I can see already various ways the boys can use their gifts for good/ safety purposes . Cannot wait for the next chapter , . Cheers, . John C . Jay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 A very nice chapter. I look forward to reading how the boys adjust to their new school. The next visit to Gandma's should be interesting. We will wait and see. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted April 15, 2017 Report Share Posted April 15, 2017 Hello Multimapper, Are their any more chapters of this great story in the pipeline? , My mind keeps drifting back seeking out more of this , . Cheers, . Johnny C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MultiMapper Posted April 19, 2017 Report Share Posted April 19, 2017 No new chapters yet but it's on my short list of what to write next. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted July 28, 2017 Report Share Posted July 28, 2017 A School House for the Boys and their worthy schoolmates ! An old castle in the back woods of PA Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MultiMapper Posted July 29, 2017 Report Share Posted July 29, 2017 I hadn't actually thought of a castle, but that could work! MM Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 19, 2017 Report Share Posted October 19, 2017 MM , Now this could be a building on a foreign consulate grounds suitable for the boys future school , . Cheers, . John C Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MultiMapper Posted October 19, 2017 Report Share Posted October 19, 2017 I see possibilities. Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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