Castle Herald Posted September 12, 2016 Report Share Posted September 12, 2016 (edited) [Special Note: The new website is now live. As a result the links throughout this thread are invalid except for the latest posting to the thread. All of Cynus stories can now be found at Cynus] Cynus Weightless It's All in The Family Chapter 1 Edited October 3, 2017 by Zach Caldwell Link website notification JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted September 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 Cynus Weightless Sanctuary Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted September 26, 2016 Report Share Posted September 26, 2016 Thank you so much for writing "Zane's " Story , I've enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters and the kids supporting/ starting a GSA branch at their school too . Cheers, . John C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted September 26, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2016 Cynus Weightless Alliances Chapter 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 3, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2016 Cynus Weightless Learning Together Chapter 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 5, 2016 Report Share Posted October 5, 2016 Cynus, Thank you for this latest chapter ! Clint & Zane are a real cute couple right now & I love all the background history on Zane's parents too, . Cheers, . Johnny C Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cynus Posted October 5, 2016 Report Share Posted October 5, 2016 15 hours ago, JohnnyC said: Cynus, Thank you for this latest chapter ! Clint & Zane are a real cute couple right now & I love all the background history on Zane's parents too, . Cheers, . Johnny C There's plenty more to come. Thanks! I especially appreciate knowing that the background history is helpful, as it's always good to know what elements work in a story and what doesn't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 10, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2016 Cynus Weightless Asked and Answered Chapter 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2016 Cynus Weightless The Family Business Chapter 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 18, 2016 Report Share Posted October 18, 2016 Wow ! Hearing Clint talking to Zane in such a loving way in this chapter was fantastic! Cheers, . Johnny C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted October 18, 2016 Report Share Posted October 18, 2016 I had to go back and reread this chapter. This strange thing between Zane and his father has me really puzzled. Add to this sense of the unreal, Clint doesn't seem to be taking Zane's problem seriously enough. Oh, I get it. From Clint's POV, both he and Zane are out to their family; what more could be wrong? Clint simply doesn't have the experience of a parent that refuses to care for their children. It's a very hard thing to try and understand. Especially since Zane is not really being honest with himself. The almost clinical detachment Zane displays as he tells Clint about his dad, doesn't lend well to showing Clint just how much this is affecting Zane. It's a defense mechanism for Zane. I get that. But it's not honest. I just keep getting this sense of foreboding. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2016 Cynus Weightless Adding It All Up Chapter 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted October 25, 2016 Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 Wow ! This is a tough chapter to process , My feelings are everywhere . I cannot wait for the next chapter to be post ! Cheers, . Johnny C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted October 31, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2016 Cynus Weightless Chapter 8 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 1, 2016 Report Share Posted November 1, 2016 Thank you for the latest chapter ! It made for some interesting reading tonight, Keep up the great work ! Cheers, . John C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted November 1, 2016 Report Share Posted November 1, 2016 When I read chapter 7, I was all kinds of emotional. Both over what Zane said and how Clint reacted. I just knew that the Clint of Fearless would Do Something and get to the bottom of Zane's inability to cope with his Dad (the apparent source of Zane's problems). This chapter leaves me kinda cold. Not sure of how I view it. Clint's reaction, to me, seems to be off... Doesn't seem to be the same Clint I had come to know in Fearless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 7, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2016 Cynus Weightless Shoot for the Star Chapter 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted November 8, 2016 Report Share Posted November 8, 2016 An Absolutely Delightful chapter! Chapter 9 completely forecloses my feelings about chapter 8. Now I know why Clint acted as he did. Should have known that Cynus had reasons for the apparent madness. Thank you Cynus... Now I feel like such an ass. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2016 Cynus Weightless The Gravity of the Situation Chapter 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted November 16, 2016 Report Share Posted November 16, 2016 Damn! More curves thrown, after such a sweet chapter in 9. I have to wonder even more about Zane's so-called father. The man is.... Opps, that would be telling! JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted November 28, 2016 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2016 Cynus Weightless Chapter 11 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 Hello Cynus , This final chapter was very moving & sincere in many ways . I appreciate you sharing your own thoughts with us afterwards . Hugs & A Kiss on Your Forehead from me too, . Johnny C PS: You had me in tears at one point ! JC Al Norris and Cynus 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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