NiteOwl13 Posted April 8, 2016 Report Share Posted April 8, 2016 A new member of the gang or a new look out guess a few more chapters will let me know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 15 boozel11 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 21, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 16 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boozel11 Posted April 25, 2016 Report Share Posted April 25, 2016 What ? They both had a chance to renew their attachment !But then Vladi came back !What else can stop them ?boozel11 Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boozel11 Posted April 26, 2016 Report Share Posted April 26, 2016 Well everything is fine in Viko land now .When his father asked about who was involved , he gave cryptic answers .Oh , can't wait ! Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted April 28, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted April 29, 2016 Report Share Posted April 29, 2016 First, I would like to say that I had a feeling that Dante might want to begin living a straight life. Glad to see his Uncle will let him.Second, I really liked the treatment you gave to the love scene with Nobu and Viktor. It takes a really good writer to turn what would be an ordinary "wank" scene, into such a tender moment.One of the best chapters you've written, Cynus. Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cynus Posted April 30, 2016 Report Share Posted April 30, 2016 First, I would like to say that I had a feeling that Dante might want to begin living a straight life. Glad to see his Uncle will let him.Second, I really liked the treatment you gave to the love scene with Nobu and Viktor. It takes a really good writer to turn what would be an ordinary "wank" scene, into such a tender moment.One of the best chapters you've written, Cynus.Thanks, Al. Chapter 17 is actually my favorite chapter in the story. Although I'm sure plenty will enjoy it for the scene between Nobuyuki and Viktor, the reason I love it is because of Dante. I really came to understand Dante and his motivations, here. This is the part of the story where I decided Dante was the hero (I've always considered Nobuyuki to be a bit of an antihero). I'm not ashamed to admit that when I wrote Dante talking to his uncle, I actually cried a little bit. This is the first time my characters felt 100% real to me, and I'll cherish the chapter forever because of it.Even if the chapter never has the same level of impact on any of the readers, it will always remain that important to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 5, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 18 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 Daisuke's treason is finally revealed. But at what cost? Masahiro barely escaped with his life.Things seem to be coming to a head here, and I think I know who that voice is that Daisuke was talking to. The clues are there and I don't think I've misread them... But time will tell. Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 19 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 20 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cynus Posted May 19, 2016 Report Share Posted May 19, 2016 Daisuke's treason is finally revealed. But at what cost? Masahiro barely escaped with his life.Things seem to be coming to a head here, and I think I know who that voice is that Daisuke was talking to. The clues are there and I don't think I've misread them... But time will tell.And now we've reached a point where Daisuke may reveal the answers. I guess we'll have to see if you're right or not. boozel11 and Al Norris 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted May 20, 2016 Report Share Posted May 20, 2016 Nice action scene!It was a bit of a surprise to see who was tailing whom, but not entirely unexpected. Several small reveals in the alignment of the various factions... And it is really hard to discuss this chapter without throwing out a lot of spoilers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted May 20, 2016 Report Share Posted May 20, 2016 The cliff hanger from last time meant this was at the top of my reading list this week. I wasn't disappointed. Thank goodness for protective big brothers! (and uncles)Al, I am pretty sure I know who Daisuke spoke with as well and I believe Masahiro suspects this person too.An exciting, intriguing, well-written story that I look forward to each week.Thanks, Cynus! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cynus Posted May 22, 2016 Report Share Posted May 22, 2016 Nice action scene!It was a bit of a surprise to see who was tailing whom, but not entirely unexpected. Several small reveals in the alignment of the various factions... And it is really hard to discuss this chapter without throwing out a lot of spoilers!And I thank you for not spoiling anything. Your comments and compliments are always appreciated, Al. Thank you. Daisuke . . . I've never revealed this before, but I actually love him. A lot. I'm excited for everyone to find out why, and to see how everyone else feels.The cliff hanger from last time meant this was at the top of my reading list this week. I wasn't disappointed. Thank goodness for protective big brothers! (and uncles)Al, I am pretty sure I know who Daisuke spoke with as well and I believe Masahiro suspects this person too.An exciting, intriguing, well-written story that I look forward to each week.Thanks, Cynus! THank you for reading it, and taking the time to comment. That uncle in there is my second favorite character in the whole story, second only to his nephew. They're practically the same personality, though, so I maybe that's why . . . (Of course, he's modeled off one of my crushes, so that probably has something to do with it, too.)We'll know how much Masahiro knows next time around. Oh Masahiro . . . poor Masahiro . . . poor Daisuke . . . I can't wait to see what you think!Thanks again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted May 26, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 21 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted June 2, 2016 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessChapter 22 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted June 9, 2016 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2016 CynusFrom the Cup of the WorthlessEpilogue boozel11 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boozel11 Posted July 6, 2016 Report Share Posted July 6, 2016 Well Cynus , I loved them all !Well written and thought out !Liked the scene in the hotel sauna .Brothers at last !boozel11 Cynus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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