Shayn059 Posted December 30, 2015 Report Share Posted December 30, 2015 (edited) Today I met an angel with shape mind and quick wit. At first I didn't realize that he couldn't walk, just sit. His mind was so fast and his eyes were so bright. I thank god for each day he continues to fight. He told me of pain so deep and so true. Tears ran down from my eyes for I never knew. The way people saw him sitting there in his chair. Turning there heads like he wasn't even there. How noble and proud I knew him to be. But sometimes he needs help its easy to see. A door you can open, a hand he may need. To help make his day, please don't make him plead. So if by some chance you see help is due. Please lend them a hand, cause this could be you. Edited December 30, 2015 by Shayn059 Jeikor, larkin and ken barber 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
larkin Posted December 31, 2015 Report Share Posted December 31, 2015 Full of empathy and compassion.. Very nice. This is what I call a seed for a longer story, told by the narrator from an observational point of view. Use almost no dialogue. Make us fall in love with the subject. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shayn059 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2015 A story, I don't know if I could do that. The poem is based on someone real and I don't want to turn him into a character. But thank you, it is a good idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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