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Anjobranco

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I do not know, but something it is not right on this sentence?

 

"Good Morning Mr. Marshal, I am sorry I didn't return your call. But I promise I was going to you, didn't have come all the way out here just to talk to me." By my smile he could tell I was teasing.

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Hmm, you are right there is something off there.

 

It may be that it should be "But I promise I was going to to; you didn't have to come all the way out here just to talk to me."

 

I'll make sure an editor sees this and get's it fixed.

 

Thanks for pointing it out!

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