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Emperor Roland

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Another interesting chapter, but I find myself wondering how the hell that school can be that messed up.  Just... wow.

Then again, my experience is... unusual.  If my high school had been that messed up, the Marines would have come by to visit.  Backed up in force by the Navy.  Parents, that is.  Growing up military... gives you a different perspective.  And I don't see many military personnel tolerating that type of environment for their kids.

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Well, I guess the good thing is that it'll be up there and waiting for you whenever you're ready. And since this was the last chapter, it won't be building a huge number of chapters for you to have to catch up on when you have time to get around to it.

Another perk could be that now you'll be able to download the ebook version of the story and have it complete, in one document, and won't have to fool with chapters.

It's not all bad.

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Update: 10 April 2016

Heritance, Chapter 5

OK, so I'm finally caught up with this story.

I think we all knew that Bitru was something other than a "normal" child, but now we see that Brandton is more than he seems, also. And off to Grandmother's House we go... To find out what this all might mean and you end the chapter!

Grrrrrrrr!!!!

In a sense, I would have to call the ending of this chapter a sort of cliffhanger. At least there are still a lot of questions left unanswered.

In a sense Darryl? How high must that cliff be, to call it such?

Sheeesh!

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