Castle Herald Posted August 24, 2015 Report Share Posted August 24, 2015 (edited) [Special Note: The new website is now live. As a result the links throughout this thread are invalid except for the latest posting to the thread. All of Roland’s stories can now be found at Roland] Part of the Revolutions Universe Short Story presented at http://www.castleroland.net/library/author/roland Edited October 3, 2017 by Zach Caldwell Link website notification Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 I love/hate this story. It was well written and very touching but I hate that Brett had to die. It's time Asswood was made to pay. (and yes I know how I spelled it). Thank you! Al Norris and Darian 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 'Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one's life for one's friends'. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 Yes, but that doesn't mean I have to like that it was necessary for that sacrifice. That's why it is still a beautiful story of a brother's love even though I wish Brett could continue to be there to watch over Kevin. Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 I think if you read past the tragedy of Brett, you can see that without the sacrifice of Brett no one would have survived. That General was going to kill them all. I think it safe to say that evil always surrounds itself with evil. JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve T. Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 I'm with Jeikor on this one. I hated to see Brett have to die. It will just make it all the better when Ashwood finally gets his just rewards. I really hope you guys are planning something really painful and nasty for him. He certainly deserves it...and more. It should make Mussolini's end look like a picnic! Al Norris and Darian 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted August 25, 2015 Report Share Posted August 25, 2015 Pondering over this story I remembered that I had to read part of the end twice. First time I thought it said Mike jumped back when Kevin collapsed but I that didn't seem right based on his actions in other RU stories so I read it again. Seeing that it was actually he jumped forward presumedly to catch Kevin. Based on Mike's characterization in the other stories can we surmise that Kevin just gained a new dad? Maybe a little good could come out of the tragedy. Darian and Al Norris 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darian Posted September 28, 2016 Report Share Posted September 28, 2016 is miike reynolds the finance manager of fredric triumph? do i remember this name right? or wasnt he mentioned in kyles part of the RU, geek squad? think there the guys name was mick, but dont remember his family name. there only is pres elec bryce mentioned, no vice pres i think. just also stumbled across this big loss and the feelings of this small just 12yo boy, kevin. how hard must it be to lose a brother, a sister or any other member of family who you are bond with. i know as i lost my mum it was very hard for us all. but to lose a brother must be even harder. who sacrifices himself to save me and many others with that. i really hope asswood and attached people get their asses wiped really painful and long lasting and mercyless. already from geek squad i have a big wrath inside me about these big egoistic assholes. about the temple and the funpark, about the treatment of gay boys and girls and their use as sex slaves for evil rich men who arent better then than those who they arrested for being unclean and gay. god, if he exists, might prevent our world from turning into this ever! Darian Fey JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted April 3, 2017 Report Share Posted April 3, 2017 Hello Roland , . Thank you for sharing this Heartfelt gem of a story with us ! Cheers, . Johnny C Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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