ken barber

“I will not disgrace him, he’s brought everything down on himself. It’s kind of a Humpty Dumpty situation. All of the king’s horses and all of the king’s men cannot put him back together again.”
 
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Lawrence made that statement while speaking with John Finnegan, the man who has taken Lawrence under his wing and given him strength, stamina, support and unconditional love.
 
Has Lawrence lost his last marbles, or is he giving of himself to protect the people he has grown to love and respect over the past few weeks?
Whatever he decides, we send you our love and support. You've, time after time, proven yourself to be a brave soul capable of loving and being loved.  I also see a strength in you Lawrence.  I'm proud to tell your story.  Thank you for letting me into your mind and soul.
 
Joe WriterMan

Thanks Hunter, 
Was trying to play the sympathy card to get him to read my stories but thanks for blowing up my spot.  

Welcome doubledbbw, I hope you enjoy the site and give some of us other poor little authors a chance.  . I also love Hunter and Joe Writerman's work and am very glad they have shared their amazing talents with us
 
Ken B

Boys in the hood.
 
I commend you for sharing your story plot with this group of blood thirsty sharks  . I am teasing of course but I can see how you feel that way. I really don't think anyone intended to tear apart your story or your talent they were truly trying to offer constructive criticism. As an opening introduction that was a lot of constructive criticism to take all at once. The very first time I posted a story online I received an email within a day tearing it apart and it wasn't nice.  I almost said nope never again, but instead I decided I would show him. Do not give up, reread all the comments above and look at them like a breakfast buffet, take what you want and leave the rest. All of us have room to grow and improve. I do really like the story plot line and think it can turn into a wonderful story. Keep sharing with us and above all else Keep writing.
 
Ken B