Jay Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 It looks as if Amar maybe smitan an bit by Jordan. It will be interesting if all three boys will be able to go with Jordan when the time comes. The shop described here are sadly to true. It makes you think with the want of cheep goods, is the over all cost to get them worth it? JohnnyC and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted July 3, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 1 - Exodus End of Part 1 Chapter 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 A wonderful end to part 1. Amar and Simir got to express how much they care for each other. All three boys though the loss of so much still lost the old man that watched over them. Firas now free to go all on the road to the unknown. They will face what comes as a unit. Jordan on this way home, back to family and friends. The boys will have lost two good men very soon. What will happen to them? I hope part two is not delayed long. I just want to know more and see how the boys makes it threw this hard times. William King and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William King Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 You will not have to wait for Part Two, it is scheduled to follow on. JohnnyC and Jay 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted July 5, 2017 Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 Hello William , Thank you so much for this latest chapter, I so too look forward to Part 2 . I want to know what will happen to our three young refugees once they reach the coast too, . Cheers, . Johnny C Jay and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted July 10, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2: The Land of Promise Antalya Chapter 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 12, 2017 Report Share Posted July 12, 2017 Very good all four made it. Now Jordan was informed he is not flying home right away. Now what to do with all three boys. Will he take them to Greece with him? I hope so, at lest the boys would be cared for a bit longer. We will see next time I hope. JohnnyC and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted July 13, 2017 Report Share Posted July 13, 2017 Hello William, Thank you for the latest chapter! Our young boys and Jordan have been on a little adventure going to the coast , I do hope he takes the boys to Greece with him if he can get them on the Ferry Boat . Or better yet they jump off the ferry and swim to Jordan's Uncle's yacht so they can sneak by customs lol, . Cheers, . John C Jay and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William King Posted July 13, 2017 Report Share Posted July 13, 2017 By the end of Part Two we will see what happens to the boys, but getting across borders is no easy thing and unless you smuggled yourself on board you would not get on a ferry going to another country without a passport. As for Jordan's uncle, well we will see what happens there very soon. Jay and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 13, 2017 Report Share Posted July 13, 2017 William, always keeping us on the edge of our seats. You give our brains a workout. We keep thinking and with hope the boys come though this unskaved. Time will tell and we will be back to watch your story. It has been and is a very wonderful one and a true joy to read. William King and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted July 17, 2017 Report Share Posted July 17, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2 - The Land of Promise Chapter 11 Al Norris 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 18, 2017 Report Share Posted July 18, 2017 A very enjoyable and relaxing read. Jordan made sure the boys had a place to say and food till his return. How long will he be or if he can return? What can he do or what he will do? While he is gone will the boys be safe? A lot of questions. Will we know next time? We have to come back and find out. Al Norris and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William King Posted July 18, 2017 Report Share Posted July 18, 2017 I do so love your comments Jay. So what's next - here is a little teaser! It doesn't really give anything away, but I include it as a spoiler all the same - sometimes readers may prefer to wait until things get revealed in the next chapter, rather than getting a little indication. Spoiler Jordan arrives in Greece, on the island of Kos, just a very short distance from Turkey, but a gulf that is almost impossible to breach without enormous risk. He joins his Uncle Ted, and is confronted with his naivety – as if he could really come to the rescue like some kind of super hero. Back in Turkey Firas is feeling lonely. Jay and Al Norris 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted July 24, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2: The Land of Promise Chapter 12 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted July 25, 2017 Report Share Posted July 25, 2017 Hello William, Thank you again for the latest chapter with our Boys ! I see that love is in the air for many of them too . Let's see what happens next, . Cheers, . Johnny C Al Norris, William King and Jay 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William King Posted July 25, 2017 Report Share Posted July 25, 2017 I am not too sure how Jordan, who is a really nice guy but not the most dynamic character, somehow got deeply involved with these boys. He is, as was shown here in this latest chapter, a little naive and unrealistic in his outlook. But then he is young, lacking in experience, so it is par for the course. However, being less conscious of danger allows you to take risks, but it doesn't protect you from the consequences. You will see quite soon some of those consequences, but will have to wait some time to see how things eventually turn out as a result of decisions made now. Read on and enjoy, and thank you for commenting. Al Norris and Jay 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted July 25, 2017 Report Share Posted July 25, 2017 Awsome chapter. Well Jordan is now with his uncel Ted. When he got an board he met Pierre a handsome french guy. Who is he, what is he doing there? Looks like the froggey is waiting to play so leep frog with Jordan. We have seen the boys are already playing with their partners. How will or if Jordan will be able to help the boys? We will just have to see want we. Al Norris and William King 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted July 31, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2: The Land of Promise Chapter 13 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted August 1, 2017 Report Share Posted August 1, 2017 Hello William, Thank you for the latest chapter ! . Plans have been made & clothes have been purchased for the boys . We will have to wait and see, . Cheers, Johnny C William King 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William King Posted August 1, 2017 Report Share Posted August 1, 2017 Probably everyone has done something reckless in their life, and Jordan's plan - if it even counts as a plan - is very risky. It may look like plain sailing, but you should never under estimate what you are up against. There is a storm coming, it will take it's time getting here, but when it hits - watch out, you better take cover! JohnnyC and Al Norris 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted August 7, 2017 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2: The Land of Promise Chapter 14 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted August 8, 2017 Report Share Posted August 8, 2017 Jordan was able to get the boys on board and out to sea. So far it looks like everything is going as plans. Well we know about ones plans. Sometime they do not work out as well as we thought. Let hope it works for them all. We have to wait till next time to fill in the questions we have. This chapter ended to soon and left us on edge. Al Norris and JohnnyC 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Caldwell Posted August 14, 2017 Report Share Posted August 14, 2017 William King Refugee, Part 2: The Land of Promise Chapter 15 JohnnyC 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyC Posted August 15, 2017 Report Share Posted August 15, 2017 Hello William, Thank you so much for the latest chapter in our young refugees life . I hope Jordan gets to see his boys again , Hopefully in a better life too , Cheers, Johnny C . William King 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Posted August 15, 2017 Report Share Posted August 15, 2017 Very nice chapter indeed. The boys and Jordan was very lucky. We hope they meet up once more. We can only hope the boys do not get took advantage of once again. We will find out maybe next time. JohnnyC and William King 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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