Darian

hope it is to be read soon. and also goes on after the last state of the story. I also wonder when Kandric goes on, it is far too long since the last chapter. Wish the 3 brothers will meet anytime soon and combine their skills.

Thx for the newest chapter. At the end you sometimes mixed up Lucas and Tristan. Used Tristan for both sides.

17 is in October and 18 us just in January. So you obviously missed one.

well, a chapter each week would be even better than sliced bread (well, of course i also like sliced bread, but it gets dry so fast) the chapters are much too short and over too quick. and then waiting another 2 weeks is torture thx Roland for your story. very nice to read and very thrilling. interesting twist now that Xavier knows what the island of protectors keep really is.

I hate cliffhangers! :D please more soon. i am hungry for more. want to know about the several teachings lying around. about the guilding of xavier. and of course about the death match at the arena. maybe even something happens to the 1st fight and the dragonling to be added to the group, to be freed. lets see. thx for this next chapter so fast. but please please more :D

wow, simply wow! he has done it another time. and i hope the next will come soon, not that long waiting like the last time. kyle always manages to break the chapter at the most thrilling scene and point and fade over into another chapter, with another point of view and location. to again build a lot of tension and not releasing it for most times. even seen in the last 2 chapters of them shattering the demon lord and the gods watching it. what happens now after that? will frexla herself come out to them? will she send some more demon lords? has kandric to come get her in the spirit realms? come on, kyle, please give us the next chapter soon, dont let us wait over a year again. not sure how long we all will be alive, but i want to read the end of kandric (in chapter 50 or later) still, and cant when i am not in this realm anymore. in my next cycle of life i wont remember the former chapters i am afraid, so would have to discover them again. and if that is likely, i dont know. thx kyle! you outdid yourself again. now we also wait for a continuation for brile, ocg, defender universe as well as the geek squad in CSU-Revolution universe. your reader Magician Darian

Hey Multimapper, I just began reading the Clan Short Universe from cornercafe. There i stumbled across some odds. Theres a story about Kenny who meets Kevin after his dad died. And Kevin lives in a drug scene in Chicago, where also Jack lives. After some reading it suddenly hit me I know who they both are, Kev and Ken from your KettleFalls story, who flee from the chicago mission and meet Bug and become his boyfriends. There they lived all the time in the bad neighborhood and mission in Chicago and got to meet Allan, their pop, not earlier than being in Kettle Falls. But in CornerCafe they meet Allan quite after Kennys arrival in Chicago where they are rescued from by the Clan Short. And are moved back to Orlando, Florida. Is this an unvoluntary inconsistency between these stories? Or is it simply a different development from the Clan Short and to be seen independent? Of course i did not finish the story yet, so I dont know any further development if they somehow are divided again to be reunited later. Darian Fey

Hey Rilbur, just finished the family values story, the last one on the page of the universe. And I am touched and impressed. But as usual the story quite ends in the middle of the story. I'd suggest to recycle the characters into a next story to connect them to the actual universe actions. What about Brian Richardson and his Uncles? As we know in november 2012 California is destroyed by a big earthquake. What happend to them? To their jobs, to their lives? And did they reunite with their other nephew? What about the Bryant family and their fight in the town? Did Laura become mayor? Did the old mayor fight her somehow? Does the AoG interfere? Maybe is it needed to get contact between the twins and the UNIT? Or with the scireians or the Alteran. Maybe you can link the story with the Alteran colony, what about lesbian women in this nation? There is still much space for fantasy and development of your story. Yours Darian Fey

wow. what was that? a story with no end at "the end". is there a 2nd book of paradise in planning? do we ever get to know who are the captors? and why all these young people were captured and also partly tortured? do we get to know if they manage to break free? where they land at? and also when? do we get to know who rescued them and how? is the UNIT the rescuers? so many questions left at the end of this story. and so few answers. i never read such a story yet with such an open end. please please go on telling us, multimapper! thx for your wonderful writings. Yours Darian Fey

hey all, long time nobody wrote in here. is there any chance zackron writes another book of footprints? wanna know how haden does, how stan and forth are, and of course what happens to barrett and hac, and to daileass and haden. and of course to the whole unit. fortunately i read time quake before i read footprints so i knew about the alteran site and what happend and happens from their point of view. that really helped much, done by fortune. still have to read several stories in the revolution universe, but also hope they all will be continued sooner than later. thx for all the authors writing that big project! Darian Fey

thx for giving the stories ur chars are based on. that gives some background knowledge then to understand them even a bit more. spider i have read and was very touched by that. so i really wondered to find them in the RU again, and a bit of their past shines through there. when i finished the time quake story ill read the mentioned above ones. hope your unfinished stories will continue too soon incl. spider, the other, shadow of a soul ... . thx for writing for us! u, kyle, joe writer man and roland are the best authors for me at the moment (besides some others i also read some stories)

hey multimapper, could it be your stories holidays handout and spider are actually part of the revolution universe? i just finished reading metamorphosis book 1 and book 2 (which isnt too long yet unfortunately) and there are all the people there again, some time older than in holidays and spider. maybe you shall add these 2 stories to the universe that nobody misses the description of cliff, ben, jd and jody and all the others around. Darian

yes, he did it again! and topped the words of all the chapters before! thanks, kyle, for another wonderful chapter of kandric. but i agree, it could have been much longer and more. hope you find your trance to kandrics world soon again and can make another spirit walk in the realms of spirits. if you are like Kandric, you shall be able to walk in both worlds effortlessly what was very mean sometimes were the cliffhangers between a subchapter and its continuation. there was total thrill and suddenly at the top the view changed to another group. e.g. i would have liked to see the reactions of the alphar and garm court about vondums revelation who killed the ice demon. he hinted that and just as we could see the reaction it was switched, scene cut. and it wasnt taken anymore at the switchback but was gone on to other things. fantastic writing, fantastic to read. i so wish this book could be sold in covers at amazon and local book stores. i am sure it would burst the top of fantasy. Please give us the next chapter soon! your reader Darian Fey