Mary Posted January 27, 2015 Report Share Posted January 27, 2015 Everyone, we had to build lexicon's and charts for the editors, authors and staff to keep the details straight of this story and others. Even those of us who were in the military, it can be overwhelming to keep everything straight. Just think of Operation Overlord during WWII. It is our aim to bring as realistic as possible an exciting narrative for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted January 27, 2015 Report Share Posted January 27, 2015 Everyone, we had to build lexicon's and charts for the editors, authors and staff to keep the details straight of this story and others. Even those of us who were in the military, it can be overwhelming to keep everything straight. Just think of Operation Overlord during WWII. It is our aim to bring as realistic as possible an exciting narrative for you. if you do not understand, a term, phrase or acronym the authors or editors will be happy to explain it. We spent countless hours researching all the elements and much of our research is recorded. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted January 27, 2015 Report Share Posted January 27, 2015 "You all allowed such incriminating evidence to be recorded?", he asked incredulously and then a grin crossed his face. ken barber 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted January 27, 2015 Report Share Posted January 27, 2015 Seriously, can not tell you all how realistic and good this is... I know there are tons of hours of work each one of those involved with the story contributed and we all appreciate it. Can not wait for the last chapter and will hope there will be a miracle happen when Zach announces tonight there is another 9 Chapters "as a special surprise" . ken barber 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Herald Posted January 28, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 The end of the mini-series is here. It will leave you wanting more. OUTSTANDING series, a must read. Chapter 9 continues at http://www.castlerol...u_authors_group Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Holy Cow, Batman! What a thrilling finish! Can I be there when you three accept the Nobel Prize for Literature? ken barber 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
samwise Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 A work of genius. Simply as a high-tech military thriller it makes Tom Clancy look like a Donald Duck comic book. Thank you very much for sharing. Mark C. and ken barber 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeikor Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Very good story! Quite exciting and easy to read. Found myself coming to the end of each chapter before I was ready. Worried about which UNIT kids survived and which ones didn't. I have my favorites and want them to make it Juan I know is now on the Ronald Reagan. Now I need to know about Khan and Runt, Christina and Oliver, and most of all Chase. Then there is Bucky and Flex still in the midst of battle in Orlando. Can't wait for more of the Revolution Universe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 The story will of course continue in the next chapters of our individual stories, or maybe even other RU stories that we write. There are so many more adventures for our intrepid characters, stay tuned. We all have thoughts and plans for what's next. Mark C. samwise and Jeikor thank you for your very kind words. Jeikor just a little hint, stay tuned for an RU story in your neck of the woods, hopefully coming soon. Mark C. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Well you guys did it 9 days 9 fregin cliff hangers ken barber 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Does that mean you hated it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike0151 Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Well, that was one HECK of a ride. Terrific work, all involved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Thank you Mike. I'm glad you liked it. Now the next question. What do we do for the 3rd Anniversary next year. Mark C. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteOwl13 Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 Hell YEA I liked this story BUT I got to find out how you get the C5 off the aircraft carrier Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Roland Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 LOL! You'll have to read the next chapter of Dawn's Early Light to find out. I will say this much though. as far how they get it off the carrier? VERY CAREFULLY! LOL NiteOwl13 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
denis_p Posted January 28, 2015 Report Share Posted January 28, 2015 "Out F*cking Standing!" Now that is what I call a Wild ride... Eric... Ken... and Roland... In my mind I'm Standing up giving you three a Standing Ovation!!! [Clapping till my hand hurts...] [This board needs More Emo's... at least a clapping one.] ['In my mind' only because it is hard to stand and type and clap with a wireless keyboard in my lap...] All three of you should be very proud of what you have just released... You guys should think about doing this again... this is soooo WELL DONE... Please... Keep this level of work up for many... Many more years... Again... "Out F*cking Standing!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
firemedic15 Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 LOVED it. Great chapters guys! The action portions were great. However I don't understand the introduction of Ivan. Seems like he was sent home and didn't really contribute much to this portion of the general story. But, his story did give a insight into what is happening in another portion of the country and set up an idea of what happened to politicians in DC. I assume he will play a role later on. Keep up the good work I definitely enjoyed your collaboration. *Note the bad comma usage just to piss off the grammer nazis! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 Thank you all for the great feed back and comments it makes it worth doing it all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 firemedic, As I have have mentioned earlier, Vanya has his part to play. He did his part for JFA but has more adventures ahead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ken barber Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 I just want to thank everyone again and invite you to Join Eric, Roland and I on a live chat this Sunday 2/1/15 at 9:15 PM GMT, 4:15 PM Eastern Time, 3:15 PM Central Time, 2:15 PM Mountain Time, 1:15 PM Pacific Time. The Chat program is very very private and you will only need to create a log in name. You can voice or text chat during the session or just listen. We will talk about the creative process, the editing process, and answer questions for the readers. The "And Justice for All" Edit staff will be on the call as well as the authors. They will answer and ask questions. We are very excited about the session and are hoping you can join us. Email castlerolandpr@gmail.com or one of the authors to reserve your space. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 I know that the three of us hope that many of you will join us for the chat. We're looking forward to it ourselves. We are all so very happy that y'all liked the mini series and we thank you very much for all the kind words that you have bestowed upon us. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 Here's a question that is on all of our minds: Did the pictures we placed in each chapter, enhance the story? Did they detract from the Story? We would really like your opinion on this, as it will help to guide us on future projects. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark C. Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 Ok, since you really want to know... For me, some of the pictures were, if not a distraction, a non-event. They really did not help me visualize much. The reason was most of them were very dark and some were "grainy". And I know you will say it was because that part of the chapter was taking place at night. The two best pictures to really help tell the story, in my opinion, were the last two. The ship firing its guns and the landing on the carrier. That last one was perfect. It really helped set the mood in the C-5, and on board the carrier. So if you are going to add pictures, make sure they actually help the reader visualize a scene or impart some needed information and are not there in the story cause it's cool. I know you all worked hard on the story and I hate to critize any part of it since it was so good, but you asked, grin... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Norris Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 Mark, criticism is what I asked for. None of us really were too keen on the idea (except that last picture in Chapter 9 - that one, well, we wanted it there regardless of any misgivings of the others). Thoughts on the added pictures were all over the spectrum. So thank you for the feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfhighlander Posted January 29, 2015 Report Share Posted January 29, 2015 Yes thank you Mark. It was sort of a last minute thing to add the pictures. I think we all liked the last picture the best for the reason you mentioned. Although I personally liked the tattered flag at the beginning of JFA 1. So thanks for you input Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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